Yeah, your an amateur. Lets start by getting off line paper.
Your not the worst to come through Newgrounds, but you are far from the best.
For the most part, you have good line work, but you need help in anatomy , your dynamics are somewhat ok, and you could use some general rounding out.
You need to get a grip on the basics of art before you start working in such a stylized fashion.
If you want to be taken seriously, the you need to start carrying yourself professionally.
Drop by the Art Forum, they are pretty handy at giving critiques and pointers. Just read the rules and be respectful.
<a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/forum/14">http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/forum/1 4</a>
Kinsei
Yeah, your an amateur. Lets start by getting off line paper.
Your not the worst to come through Newgrounds, but you are far from the best.
For the most part, you have good line work, but you need help in anatomy , your dynamics are somewhat ok, and you could use some general rounding out.
You need to get a grip on the basics of art before you start working in such a stylized fashion.
If you want to be taken seriously, the you need to start carrying yourself professionally.
Drop by the Art Forum, they are pretty handy at giving critiques and pointers. Just read the rules and be respectful.
<a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/forum/14">http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/forum/1 4</a>